YUGIOH IF i upgrede my deck with this card?PLEASE rate?

yea this is a better lookin D-Hero Deck, u just need Mystical Space Typhoon and maybe a couple of Dust Tornados to get rid of those cards that block certain monsters from attacking... u can take out that extra Dark City for a Mystical Space Typhoon, Destiny Mirage and D-Shield for the couple of Dust Tornados... they help out when u really need them, anyways, u can copy that one move from Aster Phoenix and add a Ring of Magnetism to ur Captain Tenacious, who i dont see in here... because u can use that D-Shield and have a Invincible Monster that Resurrects defeated Monsters, much like the Decoyroid/Rescueroid/Ambulanceroid combo, anyways just a suggestion, but ya Plasma is a powerful card, just wait for ur opponents strongest monster or there cheapest, the extra Dreadmaster u can take out for Plasma, the 2 Dogma's will be hard enough to summon out, unless u add another Clock Tower Prison for the extra Dark City... anyways u have a good deck, i like that Return Soul card, it helps wen someone uses Lighting Vortex, anyways u can keep one of those Mirages, but its best to keep in ur side deck in a tournament, see wat ur opponent has an ya.. anyways 9/10, its all good, but better if u had Plasma, Malicious is a good card also, but its difficult gettin him, same with Destiny Draw... anyways good luck in tournaments with this deck, u'll give someone a run for there money with this deck