One more poem I could use your input on?

Your poem is very deep your writing comes from deep within yourself. although it is very well written i had some trouble following Your thoughts, through out the poem. I guess i am used to alittle rhyming in poems but I am not saying it is bad it shows alot of challenge from with yourself and a very deep and well thought out array of emotions and turmoil you the writer endured. a job very well done!